The Mirrored Heavens | |||||||||
David J. Williams | |||||||||
Bantam Spectra, 401 pages | |||||||||
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A review by Nathan Brazil
Haskell clings tight. She feels minds out there writhing, feels the walls surging past her.'
The dynamic duo, consisting of Claire Haskell, a Razor, (2110 slang for a hacker), and Jason Marlowe, a Mech, (the
armoured minder), aren't really cyberpunk. In fact, they're not punk at all, but representatives of the
government. Their mission is to stamp out the fire of change, thus ensuring that political and military power remains
in the same hands. Meet the new boss, same as the old boss. As things progress, we often see the results of what
Haskell does, but for me there was too little of how this was accomplished. The novel is big on ideas, which is
sometimes at the expense of characterisation. David J. Williams's one-template-fits-all approach is further hampered by
wafer-thin back stories, and too much dialogue where conversational sentences consist of four or fewer
words. Williams' writing style is fun, but can also fall prey to a disorienting staccato mix of tenses, with third
and second person interchanged as he feels appropriate. There are successes and failures with this technique, most
of the latter occurring when the technology and situations concerned were crying out for more detailed breakdowns.
Something that readers will either love or hate is that it is virtually impossible to guess many of the convoluted
twists and turns cartwheeling through this story. The reason being because there are little or no clues to point
the way. Quite often it felt as if the author was churning out plot devices, as and when he felt the need, without
bothering to go to the trouble of writing a set up sequence. On the plus side, Williams does well with his action
scenes, where his one-inch-punch approach to writing means less is more. While not having the advantage of an
artists visualisations to assist him, he did manage to paint interesting graphic pictures in this reader's mind.
The Mirrored Heavens is a good, if not great, first novel. I liked the way that the US military factions
are depicted as still being divided against themselves. I liked the set-piece cinematic action sequences, and the
way that neither the Razor or the Mech could trust that their memories were real. I wasn't so enamoured with the
stilted dialogue, and felt slightly disappointed that the story did not always make the most of the exciting
cross-genre framework. Having said that, I was entertained from beginning to end, and congratulate the publisher
on finding a new talent. Take a dash of Robert A. Heinlein, season with early William Gibson, baste in
Robert Ludlum, and what you get is The Mirrored Heavens. It is by no means an ideal combination, and some
readers may not like the mix of influences at all. But I far prefer it to the alternative of the same old names
with their same old characters and settings. I have a feeling that there is much more to come from David J. Williams.
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