| The Pit Dragon Chronicles | ||||||||
| Jane Yolen | ||||||||
| Harcourt, 303, 354 and 296 pages | ||||||||
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A review by David Hebblethwaite
The first book in the series, Dragon's Blood, focuses on Jakkin's life at the nursery, telling of his attempts to steal
an egg (which, of course, he succeeds in doing) and raise the dragon in secret. For a story like this to work, the setting has to
feel absolutely real, particularly when placing an iconic creature of fantasy in a science fiction tale (and The Pit
Dragon Chronicles remains SF throughout, though it plays a game of fantasy). Yolen does a superb job of evoking the
atmosphere of the nursery and portraying the dragons as natural creatures. You feel the slime that newborn dragons are
covered in, the burns caused when dragon's blood touches human flesh... You can even almost smell the dragons -- for
once, it is high praise to say that a novel stinks! (As an aside, Dragon's Blood is an example of how to weave background
information into a text that many other writers would do well to emulate.) The characters are similarly well drawn,
from the nasty old head bonder Likkarn to the mysterious girl Akki (to whom Jakkin takes a shine). Brilliantly, Yolen
even gives a valid reason for using archaic language: dragons need to be addressed as "thee" and "thou", which allows
for lines of dialogue that would otherwise be ridiculous, such as, "Art hungry again, thou bag of lard?". Little details
like this give the book its vivid colours.
It's not all good, though: it takes a year before Jakkin's dragon is ready to fight in the Pits, so Yolen has of necessity
to compress it and miss bits out, which unfortunately makes the novel feel disjointed in places and can make it hard to
follow the passage of time. The ending is also a bit of a let-down, as we learn the plot has been stage-managed to an
unfortunate degree. Still, Dragon's Blood gets the trilogy off to an excellent start, and remains an engaging
tale in its own right.
One of the most pleasing things about The Pit Dragon Chronicles is the way that Yolen continually widens
her canvas; it makes the sequence feel like a real trilogy -- a set of three separate but linked stories -- rather than a
single tale which has been chopped into three for the sake of it. The second volume, Heart's Blood (named
after Jakkin's dragon), introduces the new master (and us) to the political situation on Austar: the planet is a
Protectorate, outside the direct jurisdiction of the Galaxian Federation (which nevertheless has a hand in some of the
world's administration). A group of Austarians has recently rebelled, aiming to bring down the present system of
masters and bonders. This is a matter of concern for both the Federation and some masters, and Jakkin is persuaded by
Federation representative Senator Golden to travel to The Rokk, Austar's capital, and infiltrate a rebel cell (though
he's not really interested in politics -- he goes because Akki infiltrated the same cell, and has now gone missing).
Heart's Blood is perhaps the best novel of the three, as it maintains the atmosphere of the first (The Rokk
is a marvelously realized place, with its mirrored windows that reflect sunlight, designed to confuse the prisoners
once held there) whilst expanding the action on to a wider stage. The political aspect is nicely handled and pleasingly
complex: Jakkin comes to no firm conclusions about whose view is best (how could he, when dragons are all he
knows?). The plot rattles along, taking several surprising turns, before coming to a thrilling conclusion that opens
the world up yet again.
The third book, A Sending of Dragons, takes Jakkin and Akki up into the wild mountains of Austar, where they
become caught up in a hidden society of cave-dwelling humans who use dragons for their own ends -- and make a desperate
bid to escape. Yolen's style remains thoroughly readable, but this volume is ultimately unsatisfactory. The problem is
not the story so much as the ending, which doesn't round off the book or the series as well as it
should. Surely A Sending of Dragons deserves a more dramatic ending than it gets (some sort of final
confrontation, at least); and the issues raised in Heart's Blood need resolving properly (but see below). However,
for all that, it is still an entertaining story in and of itself.
As a whole, the Chronicles deal with some interesting themes. Coming of age is an important one, with
Jakkin's constant striving to become a man. But it's an open question whether he ever does: he's a man in society's eyes
once he becomes a master, but then Jakkin is thrown into the world of Austarian politics, for which he is hardly
prepared. And, when we find out more about the dragons, it's uncertain whether any human on Austar has ever truly
been a man (or woman). It's a useful question to ask ourselves: do we ever really grow up, or are we always
learning? Yolen gives no clear answer, and perhaps there isn't one.
As noted earlier, there is also a political aspect to the books, and the issues remain as complex at the end of the
sequence as they were when they were first raised. If anything, they get more complicated: consider, for instance,
the following extract from near the end of the trilogy, comparing the society of cave-dwellers with life in Sarkkhan's nursery.
The three books in The Pit Dragon Chronicles were first published in the 1980s, but a fourth
volume, Dragon's Heart, is in the works, perhaps to be published in 2007. This is to be welcomed,
because A Sending of Dragons feels like only the first half of a story. The extract of Dragon's Heart
provided in the third book doesn't give much away (it serves mainly as a reminder of the world and characters), but
I hope that the fourth volume will give this engrossing and thought-provoking series the ending it deserves.
David lives out in the wilds of Yorkshire, where he attempts to make a dent in his collection of unread books. You can read more of David's reviews at his review blog. |
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