A Fistful of Sky | ||||||||
Nina Kiriki Hoffman | ||||||||
Ace Books, 353 pages | ||||||||
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A review by Matthew Peckham
Gypsum LaZelle, named with her siblings after various precious stones, is a refreshingly average, ordinary female who happens to come from a
family invested with uncanny talents. She's overweight, shuns makeup, sports a dumpy but practical wardrobe, and doesn't get out much. Each
member of her family begins life powerless, passing through something called "transition" (a metaphor for puberty here) and gaining tremendous
magical talents that can vary wildly. Gyp (as she is known) fails to transition until she turns twenty, an unusually late age. Compounding problems,
her power is one of the "unkind" variety -- the power of curses. Steeped in the obstacle course mythology of sometimes smooth, sometimes rocky
family relationships, the story becomes a collection of haphazard confrontations and serendipitous awakenings.
Hoffman creates a viable, internally consistent mythological framework to soundboard several sophisticated logic puzzles. Power in the
LaZelle family operates like a mystical ever-charging battery pack and must be dispersed daily, lest the wielder become uncomfortable to the
points of sickness. Extended charging without release can lead to death, and it turns out a relative of the family who received curse power
has died, unable -- or unwilling -- to find a way to channel the power benignly. The story's surface conundrum is thus Gyp's quest to find a
practical means of dispensing her curse energy without destroying herself or the people she loves in the process.
Beneath the fantastical pyrotechnics, though, this is a very personal story about the perils and pleasures of kith and kin. Power is a physical
extension of will, wishes and curses function as manifestations of contracts or conflicts, culminating in a struggle to contend with the
limitations and liberations of imagination. During Gyp's initial transition, she inadvertently creates a sort of doppelganger, allowing
Hoffman to thrust her protagonist into a rattling confrontation between self and Other.
The bulk of the tale is crammed full of wit and black comedy, preventing it from bogging down in tangential metaphysics-lite. You may recognize
some similarities to Ray Bradbury (the pull quote on the book suggests that Hoffman is this generation's manifestation of the venerable
grandmaster), referring specifically to Bradbury's recent From The Dust Returned about an ancient family of magical creatures and their
bizarre adventures. A Fistful of Sky is Bradbury without the literary ticks and whooshing free association; the same fondness for
haunting winsome prose passages and quirky characters, but with a firmer grip on plot and communicating its particulars to readers in straight sentences.
Hoffman's only notable issue is an occasional tendency to over-describe her protagonist's actions, such as the book's several baking scenes
in which Gyp -- by magic or otherwise -- indulges her sweet tooth.
It would be interesting to see what Hoffman could do were she to take this sort of material in even deeper, darker directions. Fans of
tortured syntax or post-structuralist slipstream may tire of Hoffman's unflinching directness, otherwise this is a fun bit of light-hearted
caprice that isn't afraid to slip into the shadows and tackle the ugly underneath.
Matthew Peckham is the pen name of Matthew Peckham. He holds a Master's Degree in English Creative Writing and is currently employed by a railroad. |
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