Electric Velocipede #9 | |||||
A review by Charlene Brusso
Hal Duncan's "The Chiaroscurist" gives us the tale of an artist, a fresco painter hired to paint the interior of a church
on an alternate Earth -- an Earth you'll think you've figured out, until another small detail turns your old idea around and
sets it up at a new, fresh angle. The fact that this happens again, and again, adds layers of meaning and creates a resonance
which makes the story much more than the seemingly simple sum of its parts. "Even the simplest of spaces may contain the
subtlest tricks of light latent in the slant of sunbeams through windows sidling round from dusk till dawn," Duncan's
artist explains as he painstakingly observes the shifting rhythms of light and shadow in the room he is to
paint. "There is no such thing as a blank page."
"Another Day" by Mark Rich and "Hard Time" by Mark W. Tiedemann deal with changing views of reality. Rich gives us a man who
is clearly insane -- the question is, just how insane is he? Tiedemann's story, more carefully crafted, introduces the
reader to an actor hired to play the role of a convicted child molester and murderer whose life in solitary confinement
is broadcast "live" as the ultimate reality TV deterrent to crime. The questions raised here about responsibility and
roles are chilling in their implications.
Jay Caselberg's "A Taste For Flowers" is likewise effectively creepy, following Tiedemann nicely with its depiction of a
sexual predator allowed to live in a space colony in order to provide necessary "population controls." Although the setting
raises logistical questions -- in this colony where spouses are assigned by the bureaucracy, wouldn't birth control make more
sense as a population control than outright murder, for one -- the writing effectively sets gets the reader into its
narrator's nasty mind.
Pride and stupidity go hand in hand in the unsettling "Braids of Grass" by Jonathan Laden, when an ambassador's
narrow-mindedness insures the mutual assured destruction of both sides. Jason Erik Lundberg's "Solipsister" is
a "Twilight Zone"-ish vignette about a man trapped inside some back corner of his girlfriend's mind, doomed to remain
because of her peculiar ability to control her own reality. More interesting is "Strange Incidents in Foreign Parts"
by Anna Tambour, a slippery tale of karmic justice, and vegetables, and ruined childhoods redeemed.
"The Euonymist", by Neil Williamson, is Calum, a human with a tightrope-walk of a job: choosing appropriate names for
newly discovered worlds. This isn't the freewheeling and creative job it sounds, for more important than the name
is the need to be "fair" in your selection, so that no one space-faring culture's language has an unfair advantage
over another.
This issue of Electric Velocipede is well worth reading, if you can manage to run down
a copy of this gem of the small print run.
Charlene's sixth grade teacher told her she would burn her eyes out before she was 30 if she kept reading and writing so much. Fortunately he was wrong. Her work has also appeared in Aboriginal SF, Amazing Stories, Dark Regions, MZB's Fantasy Magazine, and other genre magazines. |
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