Carnival | ||||||||
Elizabeth Bear | ||||||||
Bantam Spectra, 432 pages | ||||||||
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A review by Paul Kincaid
In broad terms we see Earth and its more local planets under a fascistic dictatorship, while a handful of more distant worlds
have retained their more individualistic independence. We follow two diplomats from the dictatorship on a mission to one of
these independent worlds ostensibly to return looted art treasures but really to sow the seeds for conquest. Except, of course,
that our two diplomats are goodies really, secretly working for the independence movement. Naturally there's a complication:
they discover an intelligent alien on the planet, and it is the alien that provides the means for eventual victory.
If you have not read that precise story in some old SF paperback before now, then you must have read something very like it,
at least the trajectory of the story is familiar and you recognise a lot of the plot devices you encounter along the way.
Of course, this isn't exactly the story you read, because Bear has overlaid this old spine with the flesh of much more
contemporary concerns. The diplomats, the suave Vincent Katherinessen and the tough Michelangelo Kusanagi-Jones, are homosexuals
from a world whose regressive and repressive mores mean that this could get them killed, but for the fact that they are
exceptionally well-skilled at their job and also well-practiced in deception. They are old lovers, but they have not seen
each other for seventeen years, not since their previous mission in which one betrayed the other, a betrayal which lead to
many deaths. And as the novel opens, neither knows that the other is secretly working against the Coalition; something that
we the readers become aware of long before either of the characters do.
There are multiple layers of deception in this situation already, but that is barely the start of it. The world they are
visiting, New Amazonia, is a world ruled by women (a set-up that is itself reminiscent of the feminist science fiction of
twenty or perhaps thirty years ago). Here men, untrusted because of their aggressive instincts, are destined for the
gladiatorial arena, while "gentle" men are accorded a sort of trustee status. The women, meanwhile, have acquired a curious
machismo of their own, invariably carrying pistols strapped to their waists and engaged in a culture in which duelling is
central. It is also a world with its own deceptions. Vincent and Michelangelo are working with Lesa Pretoria, the tough and
competent woman who is one of the main players in a movement to undermine the government of New Amazonia while at the same
time linking up with the anti-Coalition forces secretly represented by the diplomats. But Lesa has secret plans of her own
involving getting her clever son away from the dangers and limited opportunities of New Amazonia. At the same time, Lesa's
lover and her daughter are both involved in a violent revolutionary movement on New Amazonia, while the New Amazonian
government is covertly working to undermine the overt diplomatic mission in order to foment war. With me so far?
It is a complex plot, perhaps over-complex. There are too many layers of betrayal and deception for a book of this length,
and the various motivations of the different parties are not always as clear or as convincing as they should be. And when,
two thirds or more of the way through the novel, Bear suddenly has Michelangelo and Lesa kidnapped by a revolutionary group,
it feels too much as if she is simply adding a spot of violent action to freshen up a plot that had started to slow down, and
not enough as if this is a logical outgrowth of the plot and counterplot that has so far driven the novel. Add in first
contact with a transcendent alien, but one that is not so transcendent it doesn't take a keen interest in the doings of
humans, and you have a book that seems somewhat overloaded with plot.
Nevertheless, Bear keeps the whole thing moving at a brisk and satisfying pace. You are swept up in the drama enough to miss
most of the logical gaps in the plot. Even so, the happy ending feels more than a little contrived, and I am far from
convinced that any of the plots against the Coalition that run through the novel would have had even a fleeting chance of
success without the deus ex machina of the alien. That little gripe aside, this is exactly the sort of vivid, pacy novel
that used to make science fiction such an exciting genre to read. It is very good to see that this sort of story can still be told.
Paul Kincaid is the recipient of the SFRA's Thomas D. Clareson Award for Distinguished Service for 2006. He is the co-editor of The Arthur C. Clarke Award: A Critical Anthology. |
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