Work with Occasional Molemen | ||||||||
Jeremiah Tolbert | ||||||||
Amazon Digital Services, 36 pages | ||||||||
A review by Trent Walters
Mel, the first-person narrator in this stylized narrative, tells of life in Topeka, Kansas
where men have come home with a severe case of alopecia from their battle with the flying-saucer
Martians. Mole men, however, are a relatively more recent phenomenon. The locals spin all kinds of speculation
about where the molemen's political allegiances lie.
Meanwhile, Mel has actually seen one -- waved to it, in fact. The next time he sees one, it's a trio: sprawled
across his house, drunken, having raided his fridge, trashed his place, and deposited vomit on his
carpet. In the morning, he finds not only a mole hole in the basement bored through the cement, but also
assorted gems the molemen left behind to compensate for the damage, which Mel hopes to use to get out from
under his debt to his grandfather.
While mind-reading molemen are an interesting, rarely used speculative conceit, the more intriguing speculation
is the "family" of which Mel is a part. They are typical bigots against anything different: Martians,
molemen, whatnot. When Mel finds the gems, family members note that something fishy is up -- though they may
be mistaken about what that fishiness is about -- and want to be cut in. The union leaders, from the plant
where he works, want him to get the moles to unionized, and his mafia-like grandfather wants him to lead the
family business after Mel cuts off the hands of the mole who killed a family member.
One of the best character moments from the narrative finds Mel, a passive introspective among those who
think with their fists, contemplating a family member's habits as they're spraying ant poison in tunnels
located under the school:
If you like a solid if free-wheeling plot, spoked with probing quirky speculations and spun with a
grown-in-the-sticks style, you'll find Jeremiah Tolbert's novella-length ebook a bargain entertainment.
Trent Walters teaches science; lives in Honduras; edited poetry at Abyss & Apex; blogs science, SF, education, and literature, etc. at APB; co-instigated Mundane SF (with Geoff Ryman and Julian Todd) culminating in an issue for Interzone; studied SF writing with dozens of major writers and and editors in the field; and has published works in Daily Cabal, Electric Velocipede, Fantasy, Hadley Rille anthologies, LCRW, among others. |
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