| Goblin Fruit, Issue No. 1 | |||||
| Jessica Wick & Amal El-Mohtar | |||||
| A review by Neil Walsh
So how did I find Goblin Fruit, a web zine "devoted to poetry of the fantastical"? In fact, I know three of the
creators behind the project, one of whom is a close friend. She sent me the link and suggested I might enjoy it. If
you're cynical enough to believe that this review will be biased because of my friendship with one of the editors,
perhaps you will be charitable enough to consider any such bias cancelled out by my aversion to Internet zines. In
any case, I assure you that I am not one to praise where no praise is due. I'm writing this review because, after
visiting the site, I was so inspired by the quality of both the content and the design that I started to write an
e-mail of congratulations to my friend. Then I realized I had far too much to say and decided instead to say it here.
To enter the realm of Goblin Fruit is a brief but wonderful journey.
The stated intent is to publish quarterly, with each issue offering at least one of the poems in both text and
downloadable sound file of the author's reading of the poem -- a laudable idea, to be sure. The first issue, which has
been up and running since April, has only ten original short poems, of which you may hear four being read by their respective authors.
Regrettably, I only found one of those readings added to my enjoyment of the poetry, and that was Mike Allen's
reading of his excellent poem "Sisyphus Walks." Still, it's a good idea and I'd like to hear more readings from
authors (or perhaps professional readers).
The site design is quite handsome, liberally spiced with evocative illustrations. Of course, as the site is "best
viewed at" some resolution that differed from my current settings, and being disinclined to fiddle with my such things,
I had to suffer the annoyance of scrolling vertically and horizontally on almost every page. I never have to worry
about that sort of thing in print medium.
The first poem in the issue, "Delphi" by Elizabeth Gross, is a fairly strong beginning. It's a powerfully mythic
subject and draws the reader into the headspace of the Delphic Oracle, who, it should be remembered, was generally
considered to be other than sane. This poem offers an insight into why that may have been.
Next is "Usurper Dreams" by Eric Marin, which definitely fits the mandate of poetry of the fantastical. In 16 short
lines, Marin offers an entire narrative captured in one hesitating instant of time. The repetition of form in each
stanza heightens the sense of waiting, of held breath, of fate hovering on the razor's edge.
I'm not sure what to make of Bruce Boston's "All of the Lady in Sly Concoction." A not inconsiderable portion of the
art of poetry is the sound of the words, and the images and feelings they conjure. I quite like the way this one
sounds, and there are some fabulous images here, but I still don't really know what this poem is about. Perhaps that's
my failing, rather than the poet's.
"Inquisitor's Villanelle" by E. Sedia is one of my favourites in this issue.
It tells the story of a witch-burning from the perspective of the one who leads her to the flames. I picture the
narrator as a 17th century puritan, but there's nothing in the poem to clearly indicate who the narrator is, merely
how he (or she?) feels. The repeated lines of the villanelle form invoke here a sense of the ritual of the
experience, while the repeated words in subtly changing context reveal the guilt of my puritan witch-burner. The
real cleverness, however, comes in the play of the rhythm. The meter stumbles as the narrator's faith falters,
resumes as the narrator speaks again of the trappings of faith, and then loses entire feet, reflecting something
lost in the narrator which perhaps even good Christian faith is incapable of restoring.
"Dragon Lust" by Marge Simon is a frivolous fantasy, with an amusing twist.
Ultimately, I found it one of the weaker contributions, but not entirely unworthy. Simon also provides several of
the illustrations scattered throughout the zine, which would make even a lesser poem pardonable.
"Devouring Muse" by Thomas Zimmerman is probably best appreciated by anyone who has ever written poetry. It's an
exceedingly clever sonnet (a challenging enough form) about the creative process. The conceit of the personified
muse fits the zine's theme nicely. This one is a delightful demonstration of wit and skill.
"Pin Doll" by Patricia A. Boutilier is one that didn't conjure much empathy with me, although I liked some of the
imagery. For example: "Embracing all between the swaddling and the shroud, / I wash the newborn, and wash the
dead." Nicely balanced images of beginnings and endings, but coldly delivered.
Jennifer Crow's "Bramblefruit" is lusciously sensual, both in imagery and in its delicious sound. This one absolutely
must be read aloud. It's the kind of poem that would have had Victorian readers writhing in outrage at its implicit
sexuality. It's been a long time since I read Rossetti's "Goblin Market" but I bet this is precisely the sort of
poem the editors of Goblin Fruit were hoping for when they conceived of this little zine.
"Women of the Resurrection" by Emily Gaskin is a potent feminist poem.
Listen to this:
The final poem in the inaugural issue is Mike Allen's "Sisyphus Walks" which I mentioned earlier. I generally like
Mike Allen's poetry, and this one is a real treat. Allen's reading of the poem is definitely worth a listen.
It's the longest poem in the zine and damn is it cool. Here's Sisyphus, forgotten and abandoned in his eternal torment,
now that all the gods have died. Presumably he's grown weary of heaving rocks up hills for no purpose at all, but he
seems to be in something of a rut, as he's now hauling cyclopean bones – only this time with an aim in mind. My overall
favourite piece here.
The first issue of Goblin Fruit is on the whole quite impressive.
Issue two is scheduled to go up in July, and I'm very much looking forward to it. But check out issue one while
you can -- it will be worth your time.
If this zine were in print format, with CD attached for the audio readings, I would be first in line for a subscription.
Neil Walsh has several great passions in his life: reading, and...uh, some other things that are, no doubt, equally interesting. | |||||
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