A Choir of Ill Children | Louisiana Breakdown | |
Tom Piccirilli | Lucius Shepard | |
Night Shade Books, 238 pages | Golden Gryphon Press, 146 pages |
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A review by David Soyka
Tom Piccirilli and Lucius Shephard both take a trip down South to different, but equally disturbing destinations. Their routes offer
different scenery, but in the end they both catch the essence of a man's soul frozen in their headlights.
In Piccirilli's A Choir of Ill Children (the title refers to the sound made by certain unfortunate characters, symbolizing the pain
of the innocent), the narrator is the owner of "The Mill," a source of wealth and prestige -- as well as responsibility -- in the backwater
town of Kingdom Come. Thomas (namesake of the skeptical disciple of Jesus who demanded physical proof of resurrection, source of the
expression "doubting Thomas") inherits his position as "town father" following the mysterious death of his mother and his dad's
suicide. He also inherits responsibility for his three brothers, who are congenitally conjoined at the head, three bodies sharing a single brain.
Thomas is troubled by a dream-like event from his childhood in which he stumbled across a murdered young boy in the swamp. The murderer,
who has just lost a leg to an alligator, tries to lure Thomas as his next victim, but is outwitted. Thomas senses that the one-legged
murderer is still stalking him.
There are other mysteries. A lost girl of indeterminate age who might possibly be the child the three-headed brother claims to have
killed. The "Granny witches" who are trying to usher Thomas towards some portentous consequence. The incomprehensible warnings of his
best friend Drabs Bibbler, who is possessed by the seeming babble of "tongues" through which the spirit of the Holy Ghost -- or is it
the Devil? -- speaks. Peripherally lurking phantom-like is Maggie, Thomas's childhood sweetheart, ominously waiting to see if their relationship
will be consummated while the reader wonders if she is real. Or if that's an irrelevant consideration. Additional ingredients to spice up
this strange gumbo are a murdered nun, a pair of drug-addicted film students, a fencing biker, another brother lost at birth that may have
been conjoined to Thomas, generous quantities of moonshine (of course), a steadily unbalancing private eye, and some highly unusual sexual
relationships (which, along with the moonshine, you'd pretty much expect).
This is a brand of Southern Gothic that might be a tad too weird for its more famous practitioners. Wonderfully weird it is, though; even
when the meaning is a bit hazy, the language alone is fetching.
Shephard's Louisiana Breakdown seems almost realistic by comparison. Like Piccirilli, there's Biblical significance to an obscure
Southern town, in this case, Grail, Louisiana. The "breakdown" refers to an auto malfunction that strands in Grail our hero, Jack
Mustaine, a singer-songwriter fleeing the bad vibes of L.A. (the city of Angels). It is also the breakdown of Mustaine's sense of self,
the result of his strange relationship with Vida Dumars, the town's Midsummer Queen. Vida is on the eve of abdicating her title to make
way for her successor, a young child that is selected every twenty years. This isn't some mere festival role, this is the person designated
to draw all the back luck to her so the town of Grail can continue to prosper in a deal made several hundred years ago with a spirit called
the Good Grey Man. Vida and Jack vow to make a break for it out of town, but don't quite make it. In the course of which Jack, in true
bluesman tradition, discovers some unpleasant truths about himself which, while they don't make him a better man, make him a man with fewer
illusions. Unlike some fairy tale transformations, the ending is not happy. But it is real.
Even as he deals in "set" situations -- from the city guy stranded in a jerkwater town only to have the locals jerk him around, to the bar
of colorful characters to the old time religion rooted more voodoo than Christianity -- Shephard rises above the clichés of the form to
take a time-honored yarn someplace more thought-provoking than the usual stock. And speaking of being above the usual stock, this also
applies to Golden Gryphon's hardcover edition, particularly the
J.K. Potter's interior illustrations, though I confess I'm not too sure about the cover art.
But never being "too sure" is what Southern Gothic aims to make you feel.
David Soyka is a former journalist and college teacher who writes the occasional short story and freelance article. He makes a living writing corporate marketing communications, which is a kind of fiction without the art. |
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