The Writing of Dennis L. McKiernan: From The Silver Call to Dragondoom | ||||||||
Roc Books, 528 and 544 pages | ||||||||
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A review by Sherwood Smith
Is McKiernan wrong?
Here's Tolkien himself, in a letter to Milton Waldman, probably written about 1951 but never sent:
In The Anxiety of Influence, Harold Bloom maintains that literary works are based upon a misreading of those that preceded
them. In the case of Tolkien's influence, I would maintain that 'misreading' (Bloom goes far enough to call it 'misprision')
is incorrect; that the writer brings to Tolkien his own individual perceptual spectrum, and brings back out something that he
can then reshape and use. Writers have been doing that with the rich heritage of myth for millennia. The danger, of course,
is that the background material might profoundly overwhelm the new author's vision in the perception of the reader who is aware
of it. Back in 1977, many Tolkien lovers such as myself found Terry Brooks' The Sword of Shannara to be a mawkishly cartoonish
retelling of The Lord of the Rings, its being reset as a post-holocaust tale notwithstanding. Young readers at that
time who were not aware of The Lord of the Rings found the book to be exciting and engaging some of these even went on to
try Tolkien, to find it tedious, slow, and not enough interesting women. In other words, there was no matter of influence: the
work stood on its own, and found an audience.
The influence of the The Lord of the Rings has shown up in a surprisingly disparate number of novels since its original
appearance in the 50s. There's not just The Sword of Shannara, but Ursula K. Le Guin's The Wizard of Earthsea
contains some very strong echoes, as well as Alan Garner's The Weirdstone of Brisingamen. Barbara Hambly's
horror-fantasy The Darwath Trilogy does as well. All these writers seemed to need to work the Tolkien influence
out through their own vision, which then took off in highly individualistic directions; in each case many readers felt that
the balance of Tolkien's material was met and matched by the vision that these new writers brought to it.
There are those who maintain that McKiernan's work adheres too closely to Tolkien's mythopoesis, but I don't think that's
necessarily a detriment. In the Introduction to The Silver Call, McKiernan tells the story of the origin of this
work (meant to be a two part story, separated into two novels for its first appearance in print). He was lying flat on his
back in traction after a serious car accident. To keep his sanity he wrote this story, drawing not only on Tolkien's mythological
creation but on Cherokee tales of wee folk, and on some of the mythological sources that Tolkien drew on. His world Mithgar
is meant as a tribute, or homage, to Tolkien.
The Silver Call is his earliest writing. The two stories concern a pair of Warrows, Peregrine Fairhill and Cotton
Buckleburr, whose chief characteristics are their small stature and their gem-like eyes. They are visited in their Boskydells
village by a pair of Dwarves and a man, Lord Kian, who turns out to be a crown prince in disguise. That much is certainly
familiar, of course. Perry lives in an underground warren called The Root, but living with him as housekeeper and cook is a
comely young damman (a female Warrow) named Holly, who will keep the home fires burning for Perry. Perry is also a scholar,
and well versed in the history of Mithgar.
The three seekers are on a quest for information: they need to consult The Raven Book, an exact account of a journey made ages
ago by a Warrow named Tuckerby Underbank. It is precisely here that McKiernan's own vision starts showing its own direction:
key to Perry and Cotton being drawn from their warm and cozy village into adventure is not just the fact that they both have
memorized The Brega Path, an exact description of how to get into the ancient mountain fortress of the Dwarves, Kraggen-Cor,
but a silver horn has come into their possession, carved round with Dwarves riding horses, that must be taken as well. There
are prophesies and doomsayings galore about all these matters, and must be heeded even if not understood.
But central to them all is that silver horn. Dwarves on horseback! Everyone knows Dwarves don't ride. This mystery is lightly
referred to at first, but after the Warrows set out, to serve as guides to the Dwarves who are determined to retake their
ancient homeland from the foul creatures now infesting it, the silver horn's importance slowly becomes clear.
The rest of the story is straight-forward battle quest fare. Lots and lots of battles, with thousands of cruel-talking, ugly
critters getting hewn in droves by the heroes. Yet there is a terrible cost; those who live through that adventure are not
unscathed. Heroes die, and there is some sorrowful examination of the realities of war. In between there are glimpses of
humor. Cotton exhibits Samwise Gamgee's practical approach to life, Perry is more poetic and less mystical than Frodo
becomes, but both are good-hearted, courageous, and devoted friends. When at last the silver horn comes to be blown by
the proper person to use it, McKiernan evokes the numinous in his description of its effect.
The writing is awkward in places, sentences taking far too long for their effect, some tried-and-true purple prose from 19th
century tales employed ("We must set forth at once to array the Host against the foul Spawn."), and the battles do go on for
a very long time -- all of them -- but there is enough good character development, especially of the Dwarves to keep the
reader engaged. McKiernan's Dwarves are his strength in both books; they are interesting in The Silver Call, and
fascinatingly complex in Dragondoom.
This later work is actually set earlier in the history of Mithgar. McKiernan has written several books in between
The Silver Call and Dragondoom, and the improvement in structure, characterization, and prose shows. What
could easily have been presented as a linear tale is in fact broken into segments that begin in present time, with Thork,
a Dwarf, and a young Vanadurin woman Rider named Elyn inadvertently meeting and having to fight against a common foe who
is trying to kill them both. The reader is thus pitched headlong into the story: arrows are flying, the two are in
danger, but that doesn't stop them from looking at one another in eye-narrowed, hissing hatred and distrust.
The two reluctantly are forced into a very temporary truce; while they push forward to escape their unseen enemies, we
move back in time to the year before. We learn that Elgo, Elyn's twin, already brave and experienced however young, had
set out to get Dracongield, or dragon treasure, though many have died in the attempt. The story moves steadily forward
with Thork and Elyn having to extend their truce, without either telling the other whither they quest.
Back and forth through time McKiernan weaves, not just showing Elgo's quest to kill the evil dragon Sleeth and take its
treasure, but to the childhood of Elgo and Elyn, showing how their father (and their aunt, who is one of the best
characters in the book) had to come to accept Elyn as a Rider and not just as a well-trained daughter to marry off advantageously.
The treasure, once won, brings more grief than victory, though the Vanadurin don't make the connection; they don't have
time, as a contingent of Dwarves appears and demands that they relinquish the Dwarvish part of that treasure. Dwarves
have very long memories, and they want back that which the evil Sleeth had taken from their ancestors -- amid horrible
carnage -- ages ago. The Vanadurin retort on them with a variation of "Winners keepers, losers weepers" -- which sparks
off a single killing that swiftly turns into major battle.
Meanwhile, back to Elyn and Thork, whose enmity the reader now understands; it makes their growing friendship the more
poignant, and when they become allies at last, despite the avalanche of bad blood between their peoples, the reader
cheers. For they are not just allies -- they become personal friends. In fact...
Well, read it yourself. It's a bittersweet tale, unpredictable, written in the large bardic style that evokes some of
the better fantasists of the 19th Century. I discovered that reading it aloud, trying for a bardic cadence, benefited
the tale in a way that stories written in a more invisible modern style would not. The contrast between the two tales
with respect to influence is quite startling. The reader familiar with The Lord of the Rings has to make a kind
of leap of faith when reading The Silver Call, consciously separating off the sometimes close resemblances between
the two, particularly in the places where memory of The Fellowship of the Ring began to overwhelm the story in
hand. But, by Dragondoom, McKiernan has brought Mithgar wholly into its own; the influences are there, but informing
the whole with added richness. Again, McKiernan is especially good with Dwarves, and Thork is the best character
in an interesting, absorbing cast.
Concerning Tolkienian influence, and how it is reflected in the work of writers today, let me close with some remarks by
Tolkien, again from the letters, this one to his son Christopher, in 1944:
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