| The Wolf King | |||||
| Alice Borchardt | |||||
| Del Rey, 375 pages | |||||
| A review by William Thompson
The third work of an ongoing series (earlier novels being The Silver Wolf and
Night of the Wolf) The Wolf King continues Alice Borchardt's romantic horror fantasy
set at the end of the Roman Empire and the later rise of Charlemagne. Attempting to carve out
territory correlative to that of her sister, Anne Rice, Ms. Borchardt has chosen shape-shifters as her
theme and protagonists, specifically a pack led by the nobleman Maeniel and his bride,
Regeane. Drawing loosely upon the events surrounding Charles' invasion of Lombardy in the
late 8th century, the author's tale contains a complement of secondary
characters and storylines centred around the papal court of Rome, some of which have figured more
prominently in earlier books. Further, Ms. Borchardt has leavened her work with some delightful, as
well as largely accurate historical details, such as the superstitious belief that if a murderer
touched the body of his victim, the corpse would bleed, or the application of white lead to enhance
paleness of complexion (studies have been done as to the various uses of this potential toxin throughout
the Middle Ages, from its use above as a cosmetic to a topping agent and flavour enhancer in various
beverages that led to localized and, at the time, unrecognized poisoning epidemics!).
Unfortunately, once wandering from the specific period of which she is writing, the author's imaginings
of history become somewhat fuzzier. Her conjecture of the evolution of prehistoric man is more
romantic than anthropological, depicting a primeval Eden of noble savages plucking fruit from the
trees, to be later destroyed by the glaciations of the Paleolithic Period that, according to the
novel, allowed only hunters to survive, the more peaceful, vegetarian species of mankind forced
eventually into extinction (Konrad Lorenz and even Leakey will be shuddering in their
graves). Additionally, historical representations closer to her subject at times become
misconstrued; the survey of Roman history and its people at the top of page 243 (of this edition) is grossly simplified
and inaccurate. And while her attempts to barbarize the Franks relative to the more
Romanized remnants of Italy may in some ways be justified, the author goes overboard in her
depiction of a largely undisciplined and drunken rabble of armed louts, hung over before battle,
too inebriated to post sentries, with leaders who lop off the heads of officers simply for making
inopportune comments. Charlemagne certainly did not advance his reign by leading an
undisciplined mob, any more than the essentially tribal foundations of Frankish society would
have allowed for capricious or tyrannical actions on the part of its rulers. This was,
after all, a society in which a king still had to obtain the consent of the ruled for his actions.
At one point in her novel, one of her characters states: "A thing of power, language. Far
more powerful than the men and women who used it so casually would ever understand." While the
author may recognize this, it does not always carry over into her own writing. Much of this novel
is typified by a use of language and composition that is workman-like at best, with certain passages
and actions unclear, even acknowledging the fact some foundation for this book has been established
in previous novels. This is particularly true in instances where magic is employed. The
pool-like portal used by several of the characters remains unclear as to its provenance and workings,
as does the summoning of Remingus and his role within the narrative, beyond magically showing up in
moments of crisis. The depiction of action within the novel often remains sketchy, and certain
events transpire with a degree of serendipity, while the purpose of others, such as Regeane's eating of
a shimmer or being clothed in waterweed, are vague or undisclosed. At times, the author's
sense of setting seems to contradict itself, as with a falls located in the centre of a lake, or
similarly a still pool at a waterfall's verge. In a different episode, one is left to wonder
why Lucilla turns to shards of marble in order to cut a loaf of bread when she already is in
possession of a knife, and the description of the married Regeane as a virgin wolf becomes
particularly problematic. Finally, on occasion the author falls into the trap of repetitive
phrase or word use within a passage: casual use of language indeed!
Based upon the book's
conclusion, the various storylines in this novel appear to serve little more than as a chapter or
bridge to the next book's continuance of the series. A tale in which the heroes and heroines
are gaining ever-increasing and god-like powers, ranging from the ability to talk to animals and
plants to prophetic visions reaching millennia into the past and future, with an insight to sense
all life and gaze into the workings of the universe, invisibility, and even more talents hinted yet
to come, the accretion of these powers threatens at times to overwhelm both the context and
characters of the narrative.
Yet, for those of you who enjoy this type of story -- tales concerning "children of the night,"
werewolves, witches and vampires, the traditional cast of
Hollywood and horror -- this might momentarily sate your appetite. Certainly
those who have enjoyed recent work by authors such as Anne Rice or Laurell K. Hamilton, especially
where the genre is sprinkled with a dash of historical detail and erotica to enliven stories that
evolve in multiple and epic volumes, will likely be delighted. And, if you already relish
the aforementioned authors, any pedestrian quality discovered in the writing is unlikely to put you off.
William Thompson is a writer of speculative fiction, as yet unpublished, although he remains hopeful. In addition to pursuing his writing, he is in the degree program in information science at Indiana University. |
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