| The Way of Light | ||||||||
| Storm Constantine | ||||||||
| Victor Gollancz, 408 pages | ||||||||
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A review by William Thompson
The opening work to this epic, Sea Dragon Heir, had a decidedly split personality, literally
divided between the characters of Pharinet, who, despite her prominent and informing role in the first
volume, is largely abandoned as a character in the books that follow, and the princess Varencienne, who
returns to center stage in the third volume. Aside from the dichotomous structure found here,
Sea Dragon Heir remained vaguely focused in terms of its narrative development, drawing upon
fantasy tropes that were largely conventional and a story, except for Pharinet's sexual proclivities,
that failed to rise above the ordinary, remaining only marginally imaginative.
The second book, Crown of Silence, represented an abrupt shift, both in terms of characters (granted,
there is some continuation of players in new guises, but anyone who reads this trilogy will recognize the
changes I am referring to), locality and content, concentrating upon a magical and spiritual series
of quests that is firmly founded upon an imaginative recontextualization of traditional folklore
and myth in which allegory and symbolism is used to express ideas and themes in a way unusual for
conventional fantasy. The strength of writing, composition and narrative development here is
assured and sharply focused, each element and character contributing to a larger whole, and, unlike
the first book, the segue prompted at the end leaves the reader logically anticipating more, a
continuation of the saga fitfully and only tenuously hinted at in the first volume, but by now firmly
established in the second.
However, in The Way of Light, we experience an alteration in tone and focus once again, this
time to a more conventional and linearly progressive storyline, combining adventure and a quest
towards a buildup for the final conflict anticipated at the conclusion. Gone is the twin and
largely disconnected perspectives of the first book, as well as the allegorical underpinnings of
the second. Instead we follow the rather logical story lines revolving around the struggle
for power between the sons of the dead emperor and the empress, Tatrini, the gradual acceptance of
Valraven in his role as the True King, the abduction of Varencienne and her daughter, Ellony, by
Taropat and Shan, and the culmination of these various plot threads into the long anticipated,
climactic battle between the new Sea Dragon King and the Malagash successors to the Empire.
As the title to this book suggests, the thematic content of this novel becomes a kind of
pseudo-New Age narrative, in which the light of our spiritual nature enfolds the dark, "everyone who
walks the way of the light [casting] a shadow," light and darkness being "the same
thing." The struggle building within this novel is "not so much [a] physical
fight as a conflict of souls." Seen through this context, it is perhaps not surprising
that Taropat and Shan's abduction of Varencienne and Ellony becomes transformed into a spiritual quest to
fabled Hanana, in resemblance a veritable Shangri-La, complete with a boy priest, the Supreme Vana, who
I couldn't help thinking -- not to the book's credit -- resembled The Golden Child from the
Eddie Murphy movie. Unlike the recontextualizations occurring in the second volume, the borrowings
here are far too obvious, replete with their Tibetan-like landscape and religious observances framed
with mystical mumbo jumbo -- "She will survive with awareness and there is no greater
penance;" "If you serve the light and hold the silence of awareness with you, you become
your own Golden Land." -- which, while they may be perceived as representing truisms by
some, within the context of their presentation here border on the trite.
The author is far more successful in her continuing exploration of themes of redemption,
betrayal and love, the prison the past can hold for all, the observation that "If I
choose to live in the past I am still its victim." There is a strong reverence for
the natural world that runs throughout the trilogy, at times poignantly rendered, as in the
paean that occurs on pages 172-173 of this edition. And the author's treatment of human love and sexuality
continues the bold beliefs first announced in Wraeththu, perhaps best summed up here
by the declaration:
Unfortunately, despite the strengths noted, as well as the novel working at a certain level as simple
adventure, taken as a whole, the trilogy remains somewhat muddled and incongruent, without the appearance
of any truly unifying compositional or thematic element. As stated earlier, the three volumes
comprising this saga remain disparate and distinct from one another. There is a sense of large
spiritual quests at play, but it is as if the author, while aware of their semblance, is never fully
able to bring her various plots and themes fully into comprehensive focus, various threads and
characters, such as Pharinet, left dangling. While Shan, in book two, plays one of the
leading figures in the story, by The Way of Light he is reduced to almost an afterthought,
tromping around largely as Taropat's shadow, playing no real purpose other than to provide momentary
sexual amusement for Varencienne's pleasure (Varencienne's indifference towards Shan, while perhaps
realistic, is hardly endearing), his supposed significance as the True King's Champion never
amplified or realized. In fact, the anticipated role of all three of the True King's companions
established in the second book remains in the third for the most part incomplete. Like Shan,
Merlan Leckery, another key player from the second volume, becomes similarly disposed of by a jaunt
off to Cos. The "shadow court" of Mordryn, Senefex and Maycarpe introduced at the
end is so briefly touched upon as to seem but an addendum. And it is difficult to believe
that the anticlimactic confrontation between Valraven and Bayard will satisfy anyone.
Finally, for magic or the fantastic to truly work requires a refashioning of reality, the provision
of either an alternative realm or suspension of belief that never fully occurs in the final
book. Unlike Crown of Silence, where magic is grounded in allegory, the magic in
The Way of Light is only tenuously apprehended. Further, some of the action remains
unclear, such as in the first attempt by Tatrini to summon the elementals, Tayven's identification
with air, or Almorante's intervention near the end. Unlike the Great Hunt sequence in the
second volume, some of the action here seems only barely sketched out, and the author displays a
singular inability to render battle scenes in any compellingly detailed manner.
Ultimately, this trilogy seems as if an example where the author wished to use her far from
negligible story skills to embrace much more, but in the end was unable to successfully carry
her ambitious vision to conclusion. Some of the themes remain stillborn, others only
partially realized, and as simple adventure, much of this tale fails to become fully
rousing. This is a shame, for all the components appear at various times present to create
a gripping and compelling saga, one which, based upon elements found in the second volume,
could have elevated this series beyond the conventional adventurous saga. In the end,
too much remains attenuated, and the story is only partly successful as adventure, and never
completely thought-provoking in terms of its content. And the peripatetic character of
my comments becomes but a reflection forced from the narrative's failure to finally provide
a comprehensive compositional integrity, one plus one plus one, in this case, not equaling
a whole number.
William Thompson is a writer of speculative fiction, as yet unpublished, although he remains hopeful. In addition to pursuing his writing, he is in the degree program in information science at Indiana University. |
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