Saturn Rukh | |||||||||||||||
Robert L. Forward | |||||||||||||||
Tor Books, 318 pages | |||||||||||||||
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A review by Steven H Silver
Characterization is a large problem. None of the characters seem overly intelligent,
although Forward would have us believe they were selected because they were tops in
their field. At times, the Sexdent, as their spaceship is called, seems to be
a space-faring brothel, or, perhaps more appropriately, a junior high school,
instead of a corporate mission. Apparently, none of the crew members have taken
time to read the literature on their spacecraft, the mission, or their destination
since Forward constantly is having characters explaining to each other, as a form
of data dump, what the mission is, Saturn's parameters and the abilities of their equipment.
Despite the fact that life is known to exist in Saturn's atmosphere, the biological
aspects of the mission seem to be incredibly downplayed. There is only a single
biologist aboard the Sexdent, and she was pulled off another mission to be
on the Saturn mission. Her training is even less rigorous than her crewmates,
since she is permitted to take a vacation while they are training. Despite the
disparate pasts and goals of his characters, Forward does not allow them to
interfere with his, or their, mission. His mission seems to be to provide the
reader with an excruciating science lesson. The characters' mission, of course,
is the retrieval of meta from the Saturnian atmosphere.
Stylistically, Saturn Rukh is unrepentant pulp, reminiscent of the
stories from several decades ago. As mentioned, instead of the scientists
explaining the situation to the juvenile attachment, they are explaining the
basics to themselves. More interesting than the humans (and more human than
the humans) are the Saturnian rukhs, enormous avians who have both male and
female heads.
Eventually, the characters must pull off a last-minute escape. Unfortunately,
there is little suspense in their activities because, based on his plotting
throughout the novel, Forward has made it apparent that he is willing to allow
his characters to suddenly remember things that they all should have known
the entire time.
I've mentioned the pulpishness of Forward's style. He has what may be one of
the worst descriptions in modern science fiction, reminiscent of Heinlein's
worst prose. In chapter one when introducing Rod Morgan and Chastity Blaze,
Forward notes, "He was handsome and blond, with the same height and almost
the same muscular build as Chastity, except her chest-circumference measurement
involved different lumps from his." When this example of fine writing appears
on page 16 of a novel, it is a sure indication that things will not get better.
Although Forward does have some interesting ideas in Saturn Rukh, his
weak plotting, rationalizations and characterizations make it difficult to
maintain an interest in the book long enough for the action to reach Saturn
and the rukhs.
Steven H Silver is one of the founders and judges for the Sidewise Award for Alternate History. He sits on concoms for Windycon, Chicon 2000 and Clavius in 2001 and is co-chair of Picnicon 1998. Steven will be serving as the Programming Chairman for Chicon 2000. In addition to maintaining several bibliographies and the Harry Turtledove website, Steven is trying to get his short stories published and has recently finished his first novel. He lives at home with his wife and 3200 books. He is available for convention panels. |
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