The Twisted Root of Jaarfindor | ||||||||
Sean Wright | ||||||||
Crowswing Books, 160 pages | ||||||||
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A review by Jakob Schmidt
The Twisted Root of Jaarfindor is another entry in the growing list of slipstream fantasy/SF novels, and, while flawed,
among the most enjoyable ones. Lia-Va is a refreshingly ruthless heroine, who keeps spitting contempt at just about everyone
throughout the first half of the novel. Even though this book is obviously targeted at a young-adult audience, the emphasis is
on "adult" here: there's a hell of a lot of bad language and remorseless, gory violence. Combined with a lush, often only
hinted-at science-fantasy scenery, the result is a grim, but sweeping and fast-paced fantasy with some well thought out
twists. In many ways, this book reminds me of Michael Moorcock's Elric stories. In both cases, a mostly unscrupulous
hero of high birth driven by a sinister, addictive force, travels through a world of corruption and violence. Also, there's
a fundamental morality at work beneath the drastic scenery in both cases.
Unfortunately, Sean Wright's writing skill is far from comparable to Moorcock's. The Twisted Root of Jaarfindor has
been published in the author's own small-press, and suffers seriously from the absence of an editor. While Lia-Va proves
to be a surprisingly three dimensional character in the end, her mysterious companion Islan turns into the clichéd wise
saviour, and the villain, when finally revealed, does little besides gloating and screeching such invective
as "Kill him! Kill him!" There's also a final twist that strikes me as one turn of the screw too many. But what bugged
me most while reading was the unsteadiness of the narrators voice. Wright keeps switching between Lia-Va's perception
and an omniscient narrator who presents pieces of information that not only Lia-Va, but no inhabitant of the world of
the novel could probably know. That includes some pretty awkward metaphors that refer to our mundane reality which
tend to interrupt the flow of the novel.
Nevertheless, the concept of root addiction is original and presents and interesting twist to the idea that religion
is "opium for the masses." And for each little awkwardness, there's a worthwhile piece of imagery -- my personal favourite
being the soul of addict captain Tullock-Cha floating in the edge of his cabin, attached to his body by an umbilical cord of ectoplasm.
A conscientious rework and a good editor could probably have turned The Twisted Root of Jaarfindor into a great novel,
and I would love to read such an "improved" version. As published, the novel is a highly entertaining and intelligent
fantasy adventure, but in the end it promises more than it delivers.
Jakob writes and translates reviews, essays and short stories, most of them for the German magazine Alien Contact (www.alien-contact.de) and its publishing house Shayol. That's in his spare time, which luckily still makes up the bulk of his days. |
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