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| Anthony G. Williams | |||||||||
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A review by Nathan Brazil
Anthony G. Williams is among a growing band of authors doing his own
thing outside of big league publishing, and doing it with style. Scales
is his second novel, and marks a departure from his previous publishing
forays. This book is a work of pure science fiction, as opposed to
something with an historical context. Narrated in the first person, the
very readable story suggests inspiration from Robert A. Heinlein's Stranger In A
Strange Land, the TV series Sliders, David Icke and a smattering of
Harry Turtledove's Worldwar novels. I found it entertaining throughout, and
finished keen to read more. Having said that, the story quite often felt
rushed, perhaps due to the financial constraints of POD; the greater the
page count the more it costs to print, thus making it more expensive to
buy. Happily, this has no impact upon product quality or cover image,
both of which are excellent. Written more like an extended essay than a
full length novel, the book has a greater number of ideas than available
space. Understanding is never a problem, it's just that a natural
expansion of the more interesting themes, relationships, and
complexities of science would've been welcome. If backed by a major
publishing house, and encouraged by an experienced editor, Scales could
easily have doubled in length. Suffering most from truncation are Cade's
personal relationships, which are like instant coffee; fine for a quick
fix, but not as good as using a percolator. A percolator, in literary
terms, being development time and page count.
As the novel progresses its scope broadens dramatically, and sometimes
falls prey to credibility issues. Cade seems to develop abilities and
skills to get himself out of tight spots, rather than using existing
powers to best advantage. Similarly, the technologically advanced
saurian inhabitants of a parallel dimension we meet in the second half
of the novel become irritatingly naïve, and in dire need of a kick up
the backside. In some ways that is what they get, when Cade warns these
benevolent lizards about the danger posed by Nazi-like Saurians from the
Germany of another alternate Earth. The nasty critters provide the
author with his best source material for a sequel, if he wants to
develop a series that could attract a following. Scales begins with a
bang, and ends like the big bang, ever expanding. A virtually
invincible, scaly, trans-dimensional, super-hero adventurer, complete
with the ability to induce orgasms for his women friends using thought
alone, is a whole lot of fun. But, there's room for improvement. I would
hope that future works marshal, refine, and closely focus upon the
better ideas, giving them plenty of breathing room.
The first four chapters of Scales can be read for free at
www.quarry.nildram.co.uk.
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