| Second Contact | |||||
| J.D. Austin | |||||
| Ace Books, 199 pages | |||||
| A review by Rich Horton
J.D. Austin is not a new writer -- he has apparently published three previous novels under his
real name, Joshua Dann, and this seems to be his second novel under the name Austin. I haven't seen any of his
earlier books. Second Contact is the story of a planet named Kivlan, far across the Universe
from Earth. An Earth expedition visits Kivlan, only to be chased away by a couple of missiles. Some time
later, Earth sends another expedition, this one armed rather better, in a sincere attempt to really get to
know the Kivlanians. On another narrative thread, we follow the action on Kivlan. Apparently Kivlan is a
Utopia of lazy people, having existed in planet-wide peace for 300 years, but unfortunately some volcanic
eruptions are making the inhabitants cranky and even psychotic, to the extent that they are annoyed by
the intrusion of Earth's expedition, and, later, to the extent that one man tries to start a war and
take over the planet.
It's hard to say exactly what the book is about. Characters are introduced, described in the most glowing
terms, given love interests, and then dropped. The focus shifts from the first Earth expedition, to the
second expedition, to the action on Kivlan, and back.
Conflicts are introduced, then resolved effortlessly, usually because of the overwhelming good nature of
almost everyone, on both Earth and Kivlan. In the end, the book reminded me oddly of another very bad
novel, Alien Planet by Fletcher Pratt, a story which was first published in a pulp in the early 30s,
then resurrected after Pratt's death and published as a book. That book is a ham-handedly satirical account
of the journey of some Earthfolk to an alien planet -- the main point being a bitter contrast of the society
on that other planet with that on Earth. In a broadly similar way, much of Second Contact deals with
the rather curious utopian society of Kivlan.
But the satire, if that was intended, has almost no bite. Moreover, the alien society as portrayed is
terribly unconvincing, and terribly inconsistent. And the depiction of the next century society on
Earth is also unconvincing, and has little extrapolated depth. So -- if this is a satire, it fails
for lack of bite. Is it a serious examination of an alternate society? It fails for lack of rigor, and
lack of consistency. Is it a fun romp? It fails for lack of plot, and lack of interesting
characters. In a word -- it fails.
Utterly.
The characters are uniformly cardboard, given fawning background stories, and unconvincing and
emotionally flat love stories. (Most of which are back story anyway.) Naturally there is a love story
between a Kivlanian and a human (though the cover portrait switches the sexes) -- it takes about a paragraph
to develop. The plot is both discursive and implausible. The science is beyond absurd (though I will say
that the book never makes a pretence of having real science -- and in the hands of, say, Robert
Sheckley, the same level of science can work just fine). I thought I detected a few jokes -- some even
made me grin, some grimace, and I'm sure I missed some others. I will say that the prose is
serviceable -- nothing special, but not an encumbrance to the reading of the book. It was a waste
of some three hours of my time.
I can only add a caveat -- some editor saw enough in this book to buy it. It is possible that I have simply
and profoundly missed the point. But tread carefully.
Rich Horton is an eclectic reader in and out of the SF and fantasy genres. He's been reading SF since before the Golden Age (that is, since before he was 13). Born in Naperville, IL, he lives and works (as a Software Engineer for the proverbial Major Aerospace Company) in St. Louis area and is a regular contributor to Tangent. Stop by his website at http://www.sff.net/people/richard.horton. |
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