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A review by Paul Kincaid
It's not as easy as saying some authors are scientifically literate and some are masters of prose; though that may come into
it, it is far from being the whole story. I suspect that it is more the case that some writers turn to science fiction because
it gives them free rein to play with ideas, while others do so because of the storytelling possibilities, and those are not the
same things. I think we have always instinctively recognised this: no matter how clunky the story we are ready to praise innovative
ideas, no matter how familiar the ideas we are ready to praise great storytelling. Of course, at its best, science fiction should
combine the two, but the writers who can carry off this trick are far fewer than we like to imagine.
Eric Brown is an author who, for near enough two decades, has hovered around the top of the second division of British writers,
without ever quite making the breakthrough into the first rank. He's a solid writer who has steadily earned good if not ecstatic
reviews and who has attracted a sizeable body of adherents. Yet there has never been the groundswell of support, the word-of-mouth
excitement, the great attention-grabbing work that would propel him to the next level.
Reading this entertaining new collection one begins to understand why.
Eric Brown is a writer of ideas, and some of those ideas are very good indeed, but they are consistently let down by failures of story.
For example, "Ulla Ulla" (a title which gives the game away for anyone familiar with the history of the genre, as most of Brown's
likely readers probably will be) is about a NASA astronaut who returns from the first manned mission to Mars. Something happened
during the expedition which he has to keep secret, even from his wife, which puts a strain on the marriage (the marital breakdown
humanises a bland hero, but is left dangling long before we get to the end of the piece). A visit to an eccentric Englishman
reveals the secret: the expedition found signs of intelligent life on Mars. In fact they found the remains of the Martians from
H.G. Wells's The War of the Worlds; and the Englishman discloses that they did indeed reach Earth, though they died before
they could even leave their craft. Now we learn that the US military is sending another expedition to Mars, but also that the
astronaut has another secret he has told no-one: he found evidence that some Martians still survive. And there it ends. As far
as it goes this is a competent but unchallenging piece (though so many science fiction writers have now told us that The War
of the Worlds was actually non-fiction, the shock would come if someone told us it wasn't true). But it is all devoted
to setting up the idea (the Martian survival, the reality behind Wells's novel); the real story (how does he make known his
secret and what is the response, what happens to the marriage, to the second expedition, to the Martians) starts just at the
point that "Ulla Ulla" ends.
If "Ulla Ulla" sounds dated, the sort of tale that could have been written any time in the last fifty years, I don't think that
is a coincidence. The two pieces that are technically the best in the book (though they are far from being the best stories) are
the sorts of thing that would occur a lot in the heyday of Galaxy or
Amazing or Astounding, though they are not so common these
days. They are pure idea, all sense of wonder and nothing more; the writerly virtues of plot and character and setting can be
safely ignored because they are irrelevant to what the piece is attempting. "Ascent of Man," another too obvious title, recounts
the life of one of our far distant descendants, someone so remote it is difficult to see him as human, who lives literally in
a mound of humanity. His life is a gradual ascent through the mound into the light that will kill him. We get no clear picture
of what any of this actually looks like, but we get a vivid sense of its strangeness: the idea is king. "Instructions for
Surviving the Destruction of Star-Probe X-11-57" belongs as a sort of companion piece to Tom Godwin's "The Cold Equations." It
is written in the flat, uninflected voice of a computerised alarm system, directing the sole survivor of a spaceship
catastrophe towards safety. As in Godwin's story, this is nothing to do with the experience of survival and everything to
do with illustrating the vast and implacable horror of the void. It is a potently frightening story, but it scares the
intellect not the emotions.
Which is not to suggest that Brown cannot appeal to the emotions; the three best stories gathered here do just that. They are
three stories in his on-going Kéthani sequence. Set in contemporary Britain, in fact in the wild landscape of the Yorkshire Dales
in winter, they tell of enigmatic aliens who have brought to Earth the promise of resurrection after death. These small-scale
stories subtly explore the human and ethical effect of this innovation. In the best of the three, "Thursday's Child," a young
mother has, for religious reasons, refused to allow either herself or her young daughter to receive the necessary implant
for resurrection. Brown convincingly portrays the moral agonies that the estranged husband has to go through when the daughter
develops a life-threatening disease. This story is all emotion, its power dependent not on any big idea but on the impact of
those ideas on believable people. Much the same is true of "The Kéthani Inheritance" in which the central character must face
the death and resurrection of the domineering father he hates. Again Brown has done a wonderful job with the small-scale
everyday emotions of the characters. The third, "The Touch of Angels" which is seeing print for the first time here, deals
with the conundrum of how someone can be murdered in a world in which there is no death. It's the weakest of the three,
mainly because it doesn't have the emotional punch that the others do, but it is still a very fine story. What lets all three
of them down, however, is that in each case Brown settles for a neat, pat ending, a coincidence or an uncharacteristic action
rounding things off in a way that seems to undermine the power of the story.
Emotion hovers also in the background of "Eye of the Beholder" in which a writer finds that he can no longer see any other human beings.
But the idea is too schematic a representation of his emotional coldness, his inability to form any satisfactory human
relationship, for this to fully work as a story. There's a schematic quality also to "The Spacetime Pit" (written in
collaboration with Stephen Baxter) which tells how the sole human survivor of a space accident attempts to kick-start
civilisation on a remote and primitive planet then goes into suspended animation in her escape pod until such time as the new
civilisation might be sufficiently advanced to enable her escape. It's a clever idea succinctly covering a period of several
millennia, but since the only character in the story never acquires real substance we don't particularly care whether she makes it or not.
I have often felt that popular vote awards depend more on where a story is published than on its quality. Which is the only
possible explanation for why "Thursday's Child," which appeared in the relatively low circulation Spectrum won nothing, while
the two remaining stories in this volume, "The Children of Winter" and "Hunting the Slarque," both appeared in the much larger
circulation Interzone and both won awards. "Hunting the Slarque" is the weaker of the two. A famous hunter, killed by the
legendary Slarque on a planet facing extinction, is raised from the dead to return to the same planet and capture a
Slarque. Meanwhile his wife goes ahead, trailing the Slarque to their mountain fastness and discovering the real truth
about them. It's a simplistic story -- this happens then this happens then this happens, with no sense of deeper truths
or further ramifications -- and all the while Brown, normally good on marital relationships, manages to avoid any
interaction whatsoever between husband and wife, which might just have give the story the resonances it needs. "The
Children of Winter" is more ambitious, but again fails to make the transition from idea into story. One of a group of
youngsters awaiting their initiation into adulthood meets a member of the despised native race and, against all societal
norms, they fall in love. So far so good, there are a lot of elements in here to make a good story. But at key moments he
keeps letting it slip out of his grip. The initiation ceremony, which so much is built towards, turns out to consist of
no more than one elder giving a speech, yet we are given to believe that the contents of that speech are deadly secret
and change the minds of the youngsters irrevocably. Nothing we see or hear convinces us of any of this. Moreover, five
minutes with his lover is sufficient to convince our hero that everything he has always been taught, plus all the
life-altering revelations of the initiation ceremony, are completely wrong in every respect. Even his own notions of
his race are wrong: and he goes along with this without a quibble.
Every significant notion introduced in "The Children of Winter" has to be accepted in full upon first hearing: that is
writing to tell an idea, not writing to tell the story behind the idea.
Don't get me wrong, there is nothing in this collection that is bad, but only the Kéthani stories are likely to engage
anything other than the intellect. Anyone who reads science fiction for the ideas is going to love this collection;
anyone who reads science fiction for the story is going to wonder what the fuss is about; and Eric Brown is going to
wait longer for something to propel him into the top ranks.
Paul Kincaid is the recipient of the SFRA's Thomas D. Clareson Award for Distinguished Service for 2006. He is the co-editor of The Arthur C. Clarke Award: A Critical Anthology. |
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