John Thiel wrote:
SURPRISING STORIES, September 2009, has a piece by myself that I would like to see critiqued, a lampoon of STAR TREK's original series. Also I'd like to find out what people think of other stories in the issue. It's at http://surprisingstories.dcwi.com
I just clicked on that link and it took me to the January 2010 issue. I couldn't see any way to navigate to back issues. Perhaps there is a way to do this, but it shouldn't require detective work on the part of the reader. There is a button at the bottom called "Contents" but it just links to the page you're already looking at. I suggest you hire a professional web developer and maybe pay an artist to do your cover art.