Critique SURPRISING

[admin]

Now that I've sold stories to Analog and F&SF, selling to Asimov's is my top priority.

[John Thiel]

Hsas your F&SF sale been printed yet? I didn't run across it. I'd like to know when, if it was.

[Brightonian]

SURPRISING STORIES, September 2009, has a piece by myself that I would like to see critiqued, a lampoon of STAR TREK's original series. Also I'd like to find out what people think of other stories in the issue. It's at http://surprisingstories.dcwi.com

I just clicked on that link and it took me to the January 2010 issue. I couldn't see any way to navigate to back issues. Perhaps there is a way to do this, but it shouldn't require detective work on the part of the reader. There is a button at the bottom called "Contents" but it just links to the page you're already looking at. I suggest you hire a professional web developer and maybe pay an artist to do your cover art.

[admin]

I had high hopes that my F&SF story "Brothers of the River" would be in the next issue, but it isn't. Maybe issue after next.

[John Thiel]

Well, if that's true, I suppose no one is able to access the contents page from the cover and I surmise that no one has seen this issue.

[admin]

Gordon sends an e-mail to all the writers with stories coming up with the contents page of the next issue.

[John Thiel]

Just got the issue with your "Curiosities" item in it.