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DUNCAN, DAVID
(1913–1999). American writer.

SCIENCE FICTION, FANTASY, AND HORROR FILM CREDITS
Wrote: Rodan (American version) (Inoshiro HONDA 1956); The Monster That Challenged the World (story; script Patricia Fielder) (Arnold Lavin 1957); The Thing That Wouldn't Die (Will Cowan 1958); Monster on the Campus (Jack ARNOLD 1958); The Black Scorpion (with Robert Blees; story Paul Yawitz) (Edward Ludwig 1959); The Leech Woman (Edward Dein 1960); The Time Machine (George PAL 1960); "The Human Factor" (1963), episode of The Outer Limits; Fantastic Voyage (story Jerome BIXBY, "adaptation" Duncan, script Harry Kleiner) (Richard FLEISCHER 1966).

Film based on his work: The Time Machine: The Journey Back (Clyde Lucas 1993); The Time Machine (Simon Wells 2002).

Given the radically different demands of writing for the printed page and writing for the screen, one might expect that talents would be narrowly specialized, with excellent novelists and story writers who falter in their efforts to produce worthwhile screenplays, and skilled screenwriters who cannot craft effective prose fiction. In fact, there is ample evidence to the contrary, at least in field of science fiction, where any number of writers—including Philip WYLIE, Richard MATHESON, Harlan ELLISON, Michael CASSUTT, Melinda SNODGRASS, and Alan BRENNERT—have created both memorable stories and memorable scripts, while other writers—and David Duncan and Jerry SOHL are the first names that come to mind—have been spectacularly unsuccessful in both fields.

After contributing forgettable, and properly forgotten, novels like Dark Dominion and Occam's Razor to science fiction literature, Duncan threw himself into writing for the screen in the late 1950s, doing his part to bring the golden age of science fiction film to an inglorious end. His stories and scripts suggest that he found his first assignment—scripting the American version of Inoshiro HONDA's Rodan—far more enlightening than anything he had encountered in the written literature. Although I will admit to harboring a peculiar fondness for The Black Scorpion, that is undoubtedly due to the charming slobber dripping from the giant insect's mouth (courtesy of Willis O'BRIEN), not any nuances in Duncan and Robert Blees's script; and the detached head of The Thing That Wouldn't Die is good for a few laughs, at least on first viewing. But you will search long and hard to find any genuinely appreciative commentaries on these films or The Monster That Challenged the World, Monster on the Campus and The Leech Woman, for they are witless assemblages of horror-film clichés, stale cautionary tales suggesting that "how to write a science fiction film" is one of those things that Man Is Not Meant to Know.

With this woeful track record, it is hard to see why George PAL thought Duncan was the ideal writer to adapt H. G. WELLS's The Time Machine to the screen, but he initially tried very hard to do justice to its author. His original script, which I have read, reflected some attentiveness to Wells and his philosophy during its scenes of the Time Traveller in the near future, when he incredulously and bitterly observes London during World War I, World War II, and (in 1967) World War III. But Duncan could not deal intelligently with the novel's main sequence, reducing Wells's Eloi to emblems of human sloth and lack of ambition who must be schooled by the Time Traveller in the manly arts of hand-to-hand combat so that they can defeat the bestial Morlocks and, one must suppose, eventually launch their own World War IV. In those frenetic scenes of the Eloi discovering how much fun it is to clobber Morlocks, one observes source material not only being butchered, but betrayed as well. Ironically, since later film versions of The Time Machine, officially or not, always seem to betray Duncan's influence, this horrid script will likely stand as his most enduring achievement.

Apparently finding it difficult to obtain further film work, Duncan moved into television, writing an early episode of The Outer Limits, "The Human Factor," a routine story of mind exchange unenlivened by added images of an irrelevant monster; understandably, he was not invited to write another episode. As his final film assignment, he played some ill-defined role in the transformation of Jerome BIXBY and Otto Klement's interesting story into Harry Kleiner's vapid screenplay for Fantastic Voyage; then, until his death in 1999, he lived in obscurity, the dark dominion of writers who never rise above the ordinary.

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