Electric Velocipede #6 | |||||
A review by Matthew Cheney
John Klima has done a fine job of arranging the stories and poems in this issue, because most of them offer subtle echoes of what comes
before and after them, echoes of tone and theme and style. For instance, many of the stories have elements of horror, starting with
the light and jokey horror of Liz Williams's tale, "Indicating the Awakening of Persons Buried Alive," moving to the darker humor
of "Sundrew" by Neil Ayres, then the mixed tones in Edd Vick's science fictional horror story "Choice Cuts" and further
onward. Infections fill these stories, characters suffer hungry desires, love and death entwine. There are stylistic
correlations, too: multiple stories told from a monster's point of view, or a point of view we don't expect (Ariadne corrects
the myths about her [or does she?] in a story by Stepan Chapman, while William Shunn's "Why I Think I'll Be Staying Home Tonight"
is a monologue directly addressed to the reader). Some of the stories are slight, but all are worth the time it takes to read them.
Some, though, are worth more than that. "Choice Cuts," for instance, is a compelling tale of an overpopulated future where
childbirth has been replaced by the ability of minds to transfer bodies. The story ambitiously tackles a number of different
ideas at once, and though it may feel at times like satire, it seems to me that rather than satirizing anything, Vick is simply
following his premises to their conclusions. Some of the ideas suffer inevitable neglect or lack of development, because Vick
doesn't let anything get in the way of the (at times predictable) plot, a choice that makes the story enjoyable to read, but
unsatisfying on the whole.
"Morris, His Self" by Michael Simanoff is a perplexing story, but beautifully so. The eponymous Morris is a man who loves
cheese and sardines, and his love carries him off on an adventure, though the actual nature of that adventure is not
completely clear at the end of the story.
Some readers will find the story bewildering, its pace too slow, its characters' motives too unclear, but to me "Morris,
His Self" represents exactly what the small presses present so well: stories that can't be pigeonholed, that don't fit
traditional expectations of "what a story should do", and that instead open up new possibilities. When written with care
and intelligence, such stories teach us how to appreciate them, and I found a second reading of "Morris, His Self" far
more rewarding than the first reading had been. Unless all you want is immediate and undemanding diversion from the pains
of life, a story that reads better when reread is a story that deserves respect.
There is even better writing within this issue of Electric Velocipede, however, and it is by Alan DeNiro, who
is quickly proving himself to be one of the most original and surprising short story writers within the SF field. His
"A Keeper" is undoubtably science fiction, but it is gonzo science fiction. Nearly every paragraph offers an off-kilter
detail, an unpredictable turn of phrase, or a strange setting, but all of it is grounded in some sort of extrapolation,
so that while the story feels perfectly surreal, it's really no more surreal than a story by Bruce Sterling or Rudy Rucker.
As Edd Vick did with "Choice Cuts", DeNiro fills his story with ideas, themes, and possibilities, but "A Keeper" is a
better piece of work because its elements are balanced perfectly. The first page overwhelms the reader with odd details,
and then the details begin to cohere, to build off of each other. A simple quest plot quickly takes over, but the plot
is a useful tool, something to move characters from place to place, rather than the entire reason for the story to exist
or the primary pleasure it offers.
Consider the following dialogue, from a scene in the story where the narrator is talking with a doctor:
"I thought you said this was a curse. And besides, there are no such things as curses."
He gives that patient, patient I'm-a-doctor smile. "Well, our new manuals have a new ergonomics towards disease disclosure
for doctors -- I mean, shamens. We are urged to prescribe the most superstitious names and causes possible. It's supposed
to quell tension."
"A Keeper" is far more fun to read than I have made it appear, but I think it is important to demonstrate that because a
story is written in a light tone and filled with weird moments, it is not necessarily lacking in substance. And because
a magazine is published on a shoe-string budget and has a tiny circulation, it is not necessarily incapable of offering a
batch of work of considerably high quality, a quality that even the best-financed and best-distributed magazines struggle to provide.
Matthew Cheney teaches at the New Hampton School and has published in English Journal, Failbetter.com, Ideomancer, and Locus, among other places. He writes regularly about science fiction on his weblog, The Mumpsimus. |
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