Electric Velocipede, Number 4 | |||||
A review by Martin Lewis
The lead story is "The Ship" by Jay Caselberg, a writer whose star is in ascendance, at the moment. The psychological damage of its
protagonist acts as a veil to obscure the adultery and murder which takes place off stage and, as such, the story gives an interesting
take on the old theme of space psychosis, though occasionally Caselberg plays his hand too openly. Stepan Chapman is the big name of
the issue providing "Fat Nate's Master Plan", a humorous story of insect gangsters in the mode of Paul Di Filippo. It's slight but written
with wit, verve and skill. Beth Adele Long's "The Rose Thief" concerns a mysterious breed of thieves who descend on rose bushes to
consume their petals. This premise sounds worryingly whimsical but Long's prose has an icy quality that makes for a very strong
story:
Elsewhere in the issue we are presented with opaque slipstream, queasy semi-satire, po-faced post-apocalyptic SF and, in the case of
Mark Rich's "Catch and Release", an obvious, one joke short short. None of these present the reader with anything to get overly excited about.
Electric Velocipede also publishes poetry, which in this issue is of markedly lesser quality than the prose. Several of the pieces
are simply haikus, a form the editor is keen on but which I am less convinced about. Added to this is the fact that the author of
the two longer pieces, Christina Sng, doesn't seem to understand that poetry is more than a case of inserting a line break every half dozen words.
Although this issue is not particularly strong content-wise, the nine stories plus poetry and non-fiction still probably offers value
for money. Klima is clearly selecting interesting material for Electric Velocipede but unfortunately the execution of the stories
presented here is decidedly hit and miss.
I'd also like to place this review in the context of other reviews of Electric Velocipede, particularly Trent Walters overview of the
first three issues in this publication. In it he writes: "I get upset alongside (or sometimes for) the writers or editors, when they
have done something well, get slighted by a cursory or negative review without substantiating precisely why." It probably won't have
escaped the reader's notice that this could be applied to my review as could his other criticism of "giving a paltry handful of
paragraphs mention... (averaging a sentence per work)." Why then have I chosen to ignore Walter's specific criticism? Criticism can
take many forms and a review is only one of them. In my view sustained, in-depth criticism can only be applied to a substantial
body of work (regardless of its quality) and Electric Velocipede #4 simply does not meet this criterion. Instead of a critical
essay I offer a review that is a brief, personal assessment of the fanzine, in the manner of Rich Horton's previous reviews.
Martin Lewis reviews for The Telegraph And Argus, The Alien Online and Matrix, the newsletter of the British Science Fiction Association. He lives in North London. |
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