Eclipse Two | ||||||||
edited by Jonathan Strahan | ||||||||
Night Shade Books, 287 pages | ||||||||
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A review by Steven H Silver
Eclipse Two opens with Karl Schroeder's "The Hero," which is a story based on world-building of the Hal Clement
sort. As with Terry Dowling's story near the end of the collection, the reader learns to read Schroeder's tale as it
happens, mostly because the setting is not anything which the reader is expecting as Jessie and his companions from
the Mistelle are seeking a great treasure, or something else, inside a bug. The plot of the story is almost lost in
the explanation of the strange world Jessie inhabits.
Two brothers who have gone separate ways are the focus of Stephen Baxter's "Turing's Apples." His narrator is a family
man who specializes in security, while the other brother, Wilson, leads a life more focused on his work in
mathematics. When Wilson is on a team working to crack the first interstellar message, his solitude becomes a liability
in a way that nobody could have foreseen, and it is up to Baxter's narrator to try to get him to return his attention
to the good of the human race rather than abstract knowledge.
In a galactic empire with a religion-based imperial family, Ken Scholes looks at what the succession to the throne
means in "Invisible Empire of Ascending Light." Tana Berrique is a Missionary General whose task is to interview those
who make claim to being the chosen successor to the dying emperor. Her task is one of cynicism and disappointment
until she meets H'ru, and discovers that when faced with what she has been looking for throughout her career, she is
unsure of how to handle the situation or the individuals involves. Although Scholes keeps the story small, it hints
at a much broader realm that may be of interest.
Paul Cornell examines a virtual reality game gone awry in "Michael Laurits Is: Drowning." In this world, as player
Michael Laurits is on the verge of death, a friend of his manages to download Laurits into the system. The legal
status of Laurits as well as the intellectual property rights of the company that runs the game are briefly
explored, although Cornell doesn't look at any of the issues in detail. Told in short, almost choppy, sections,
the piece seems more an experimental work or an outline for a longer, philosophical work, than a story in its own right.
"Night of the Firstlings" is Margo Lanagan's retelling of the story of the tenth plague and the flight from Egypt
from the point of view of a child too young to fully understand what is happening. Lanagan has altered the setting
somewhat, perhaps to allow herself more narrative freedom, but her tale of the Dukka's flight from the Gypsies is
familiar. Unfortunately, that familiarity isn't broken by any real surprises as Lanagan relates the Dukka's flight
across the sea bed.
Nancy Kress sketches out her characters' futures in "Elevator." Trapped in the titular mode of transportation for
ten hours, the ranting of an old woman with dementia take on extra meaning once the characters escape their small
prison. Seen through the eyes of one character, Kress's story seems a little slight, as if it could be expanded to
show more clearly the woman's predictions' effects on the characters.
In "The Illustrated Biography of Lord Grimm," Daryl Gregory looks at the reactions people who live in a country
ruled by a super villain have when the American super-heroes come to attack him. Lord Grimm is the Victor
von Doom-esque ruler of Trovenia. Although considered a terrorist by the United States, or at least the übermenchen
who defend American society, most of the citizens of Trovenia are perfectly happy to live under his rule, except
for the numerous invasions by the übermenchen and they way it disrupts their lives. The story is interesting
and raises many points about the idea of heroes and villains.
In his few published short stories, Ted Chiang has set the bar for himself quite high. Fortunately, "Exhalation"
does nothing to lower the bar, although it seems that there must come a time when Chiang can no longer clear the
expectations he has set for himself. In "Exhalation," Chiang gets into the mind of a robot who is concerned about
the extinction of his race. Set in a time when the robots have no clue about their mechanical origin, or even how
they function, Chiang's protagonist decides to experiment on itself to find out what makes its memory work and,
therefore, what the source of life is. Its discovery makes it realize that entropy is ever-increasing and that
any attempt to slow it down will only increase the rate. Chiang's robot has very human concerns and responses to
the situation in which it finds itself.
"Down and Out in the Magic Kingdom" by David Moles is a look at the world of virtual gaming from the NPCs (or cast
members) stuck inside the game. In Moles's world, however, these NPCs are humans who have sold themselves to the
gaming company, although Moles never fully explains the procedure or reasoning. When the gaming company is
sold and the "physics" of the fantasy world changes, the NPCs stage a strike and things quickly go downhill. Moles
looks at the legal aspects of what is happening, filling in with looks at the personal relationships which
cropped up between the NPCs during the course of their indenture.
Peter S. Beagle looks at a Rabbi's obsession with a model from a twenty-year old photo and his assistant, a young boy
who sees the Rabbi's obsession as an excellent way to avoid working on his bar mitzvah lessons in "The Rabbi's
Hobby." For most of the story, Rabbi Tuvim and Joseph's quest for the model's identity could have been a straight
mystery, and even after her identity is revealed, there is nothing, at first, necessarily fantastic about her,
but Beagle provides a twist and makes the model a key figure, not so much for Rabbi Tuvim, but for Joseph and
the photographer's daughter, who has helped the two figure out the answer to their question.
The title of Jeffrey Ford's story, "The Seventh Expression of the Robot General," places, in some ways, too much
emphasis on a minor part of the story. The Robot General was designed by humanity as the perfect killer and leader
of men for a war against the alien Harvang. Described mostly after the war is over, Ford indicates a private
loneliness, or perhaps ennui, that the Robot General suffers, depicted in his hidden seventh expression. Although
Ford shows the robot as something sans peer, he never really explores the emotions and thoughts the robot seems
to be having.
Richard Parks creates a wonderful rural setting for a witch who is just learning how to serve her village following
the death of her grandmother, the old witch, as well as discovering a world beyond that which she knew
in "Skin Deep." Ceren's life is complicated not only by the different skins she can wear to make sure she can
do her jobs, but, more importantly, by the young farmer who has moved in just over the ridge from her.
"Ex Cathedra" is a story filled with big ideas about time travel, the galaxy, and the rights of man. Unfortunately,
author Tony Daniel attempts to present these ideas in an almost experimental style which has a tendency to get in
the way of his concepts. Daniel begins with a slow pace, introducing the reader to the concepts gradually, almost
too gradually. By the end of the story, the ideas are coming fast and furious, not allowing the reader to fully
internalize them before moving on to the next idea. The ideal pace for the story exists somewhere in the middle.
Terry Dowling's "Truth Window: A Tale of the Bedlam Rose" has an interesting idea... humans under alien occupation
using the misheard lyrics of an ancient folk song as a rallying cry. Dowling's style has a tendency to get in the
way of the story's plot and ideas, but at the same time, it is an example of the science fiction story that
teaches the reader how to read it as it progresses.
"Fury" by Alastair Reynolds is a tribute to Isaac Asimov, complete with massive galactic empires, robots who
protect humans, and rogue robots. When an assassin attempt to kill the nigh immortal emperor of the Galaxy,
his head of security must find out what was behind the assassination attempt, only to be shocked by the length
of time it had been in the works, as well as the assassin's own relationship to him. Reynolds does a good job
of evoking Asimov's Foundation and Robots series without
adhering slavishly to it, instead making the story,
and the setting, which differs in significant ways from Asimov's, his own.
Eclipse Two has its share of standout stories, including the pieces of Reynolds, Baxter, Gregory, Chiang,
Park, Beagle... In fact, most of the stories in Eclipse Two are well worth the time (and yes, sometimes,
effort). With luck, Strahan will be able to continue to edit the series, and stories of this caliber, for
several more volumes.
Steven H Silver is a seven-time Hugo Nominee for Best Fan Writer and the editor of the anthologies Wondrous Beginnings, Magical Beginnings, and Horrible Beginnings. He is the publisher of ISFiC Press. In addition to maintaining several bibliographies and the Harry Turtledove website, Steven is heavily involved in convention running and publishes the fanzine Argentus. |
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